FREE on on iBooks today 6 8 2018 Laura I Only Wanted Three Things In Life Keep My Little Brother Lucas Out Of Trouble, Finish My Degree, And Stay The Hell Away From Will Shriner Until Lucas Pissed Off The Wrong People And Made Will Our Only Hope For Survival Now He Thinks He Owns Me, And Every Time I See Those Dark Piercing Eyes, I Know Exactly What S On His Mind To Make Me Beg To Make Me Scream To Make Me Want MORE Disciple Is A Full Length, Standalone Romance Novel With Steamy Hot Sex, No Cheating, Strong Language, An HEA Ending And NO CLIFFHANGERS Contains Dark And Disturbing Themes, And Over The Top Sexiness That May Be Uncomfortable For Some Readers Terrible All it was was sex sex and sex the girls brother was in trouble and instead of helping him or anything like that she s keeps going back to a guy and having sex with them there is sex on almost every single page there is no she shows no emotion towards her brother all it is is about the guy if that was ever my brother I would be yelling at him and trying to better him not worry about a guy and fucking him This is an awful book and I don t recommend for anyone Cliffhanger suck I seem to be having a bad run at the moment This is another book that promised so much but failed to deliver This is certainly not a MC book by any stretch of the imagination You didn t get any insight in to a MC that you would expect The h had far to many TSTL moments to be forgiven and I really didn t like her much Three times you got to the end of a chapter to find that the next chapter was 2 or 3 months later and the h and H had split up with absolutely no warning Then we come to the grammar some paragraphs read like they had been translated from a foreign language and made very little sense There were numerous times where letters had been missed off the end of words and in some cases there were completely wrong words for example tights instead of thighs Normally grammar issues don t bother me but there were far too many to excuse Finally I enjoy a good sex scene with the best of them but there were far too many and they were pretty much mechanical with very little emotion. This is a book that needed an editor in the worst way There are so many sentences that sound ridiculous and that totally disregard all the rules of grammar For example, here are a few direct quotes from this book The moment their powerful attraction was instigated, nothing matter , Now he bellowed He looked like a fiend and she did what he was told There was no doubt he was watching her as she had been her What the hell This made for difficult reading, because the entire book was filled with such writing And don t even get me started on the whining brat who s our heroine I absolutely hated her I Could never believe that Will would continuously put up with her bullshit The plot was also convoluted and unbelievable I will give this writer one star for effort but I d like to suggest to her, The Element of Style book on grammar Not worth the time to struggle through this book. Too much drama Wow This book was too busy and the grammar spelling punctuation was bad Talk about wishy washy It started out with Laura trying to protect her brother He ends up joining a bad gang Her and Will s relationship is drama They are together and then not and then back together Instead of going in to everything I don t like it would just be easier to say this book was too busy, too much drama, and to many grammar mistakes. Loved the hero So, I gave this 4 stars because I loved the Hero, Will Shriner I very much disliked the heroine She drove me crazy She was constantly making trouble for everyone because she always thought her way was the right way, even after the H proved her wrong time and again None of her plans worked out, EVER And the end results, 100% her fault I love Sophia s books though, so I will continue read them Laura lives to protect her brother who has gotten himself involved in gangs Will, the head MC of a biker club, steps into help Laura jumps into the sack with Will, Will protects Laura and tries to fix Lucas, her brother This was a muddled hot mess Laura I felt was not deserving of Will, she treated him like crap I also thought she was really an idiot when it came to her brother I wanted to like but it was way to much drama for me. Edit edit editOk I could not finish this There was so many times I had to stop and re read what was written And oh my goodness did every single page have to have sex Oh and let s not forget having sex within two minutes of meeting in the hallway where her younger brother is like right there Don t think I will be reading any of this series.
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- Kindle Edition
- 302 pages
- Sophia Hampton
- 15 September 2017 Sophia Hampton